The Fakebook looks great! The only thing i would say you could have done better was maybe incorporate the questions more into stories rather than just saying: Life changing event, and just listing what it was. I would have done it a little differently, maybe like, "wow today i experienced a life changing event" and then went on to list what it was. I would have also approached the topic of the difference between you and the witch a little differently. Maybe not bashing her. Other than that you guys did a great job!
Awesome Fakebook! I really likes the detail and the evident work your group put into the posts as well as the profile information. It was also very creative and humorous how you listed his birthday as "Beginning of Time" and his job as "Protector of Narnia." I noticed that on the friends list you used characters from other books, but only used their first names. Maybe if you include their entire name, and not just their first, the pictures would match the characters better. Overall very well done!
I am impressed by this Fakebook. You did a very good job explaining Aslan's personality. I also thought how you describe Aslan as how we are relating him to Christ is pretty impressive. I also thought it was humorous on how you describe his job as "Protector of Narnia." One thing that may or may not be correct though, you labeled his birthday as the beginning of time. He was there during the creation of Narnia however there were other world that were created, (such as ours), although he may or may not have been around when the other worlds were created or being created.
The Fakebook looks great! The only thing i would say you could have done better was maybe incorporate the questions more into stories rather than just saying: Life changing event, and just listing what it was. I would have done it a little differently, maybe like, "wow today i experienced a life changing event" and then went on to list what it was. I would have also approached the topic of the difference between you and the witch a little differently. Maybe not bashing her. Other than that you guys did a great job!
ReplyDeleteAwesome Fakebook! I really likes the detail and the evident work your group put into the posts as well as the profile information. It was also very creative and humorous how you listed his birthday as "Beginning of Time" and his job as "Protector of Narnia." I noticed that on the friends list you used characters from other books, but only used their first names. Maybe if you include their entire name, and not just their first, the pictures would match the characters better. Overall very well done!
ReplyDeleteI am impressed by this Fakebook. You did a very good job explaining Aslan's personality. I also thought how you describe Aslan as how we are relating him to Christ is pretty impressive. I also thought it was humorous on how you describe his job as "Protector of Narnia." One thing that may or may not be correct though, you labeled his birthday as the beginning of time. He was there during the creation of Narnia however there were other world that were created, (such as ours), although he may or may not have been around when the other worlds were created or being created.
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